black shield or lone wolf ?

[Gantz the slaughterer 1]

needing tips....

I like the idea of creating an assault marine from the space wolf chapter.
tell me wath you think about this story...

the set was a feudal world under the domain of the SW (needing to find a planet, some help?)
One man(Grifo) want to become a king and create an army in order to conquer the regions.
In his journey this man meet Thorwald (hour hero).
Soon Thorwald became the captain of the army.
In one battle they encounter a deamon and in an epic battle they suceed to banish him.
Njal Stormcaller was also in pursuit of the deamon and be surprised of wath the duo was able
to do...and he decided to transform the two young in adept of the chapter...
the two beacame space marine and soon Grifo became seargent...
but Grifo hold greed in his heart...
in one special mission under the command of one inquisitor(female), Grifo turn to the ruinos
power and sacrifies all of his brother...
Grifo also ***** the inquisitor who had sworn to protect in front of Thorwald.
Thorwald the last one survived of the pack and was immobilised by the deamons
that came to celebrate the new prince born.
trying to rescue the inquisitor thorwald lost an eye and forced to amputate his arm to
free himself.
After this ordeal Thorwald manage to fleed with the inconscious inquisitor...
Thorwald was obsessed with revenge and disobey also to the old wolf in order to have it.
After killing his hold friend he returns to the fang to accept the punishment....

what logan do now?
banish him?
killing him?

sorry for the english...and yes the story was inspired by berserk

[crisaron 2]

If you look at ultramarine books the ban them from the chapter until they destroy the womb demons where they have to go (Uriel and is mate) into the eye of terror by themself where the meet a full squad of renegades.

Those renegade switch side and vindicate themself by doing one last mission for the Emperor.

So yeah being sent off to the DW as a black shield could be a solution...

 

But one thing is sure black shield should have no solo mode powers except the generic ones (the ones available to all SM) since they hide their chapter origin as they are shamed/shunned/exiled that is why there are no chapter iconography. The SM as lost is right to bare them and must be a black shield.

[crisaron 2]

the process was called a death-oat i think. Until death or complition of their oat they could not go back to the Ultramarine or wear there ultramarine icon. (not sure about the icon)

[pvhammer 0]

I thought space marine candidates were chosen as young boys not fully grown men.