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In Fury of Osano-Wo (page 125), there is extra text in "With a sudden, harsh incantation and a downward gesture or gaze, a shugenja trained in the invocation call the Fury of Osano-wo can conjure a bolt of lightning to strike foes with a powerful blast." Consider "With a sudden, harsh incantation and a downward gesture or gaze, a shugenja trained in this invocation summons Osano-wo's fury, conjuring a bolt of lightning to strike their foe with a powerful blast."

Also, the second New Opportunity says "Each target and other character at Range 0-2 of the target..." The technique only targets one enemy and has no opportunities that let it affect others, so that should be "The target and any character within Range 0-2 of the target..."

In the flavor text for Katana of Fire (page 126), insert "into" before "existence" in "burst of fire swirls existence in their grip in the shape of a sword." Also, in the New Opportunities:

  1. The first two opportunities run together. Please move the second to a new line.
  2. Because it's possible to create any type of weapon with the invocation by using the first opportunity, the second opportunity ("You may immediately perform a Strike action with the Katana you made") should say "weapon" instead of "katana" unless allowing a strike with any weapon would be unbalanced. I'm assuming it's fine, as Bo of Water allows a strike regardless of the form the weapon takes.

In Feigned Opening (page 134), "next attack checks against each target" should be "next attack check." "Next" can't be a multiple, and "each target" makes it clear it applies to every target, not just one.

In the technique Slippery Maneuvers (page 138):

  1. "Description" should be bolded,
  2. The "as" in "If you succeed and the conflict as a skirmish" should be "is."
  3. The second "you" in "If you succeed and the conflict is a mass battle, you and you cohort" should be "your."

In the technique Tributaries of Trade (page 139):

  1. Delete the first "your" in "If you succeed, you produce an item with rarity less than or equal to your 1 plus your bonus successes."
  2. To my understanding, items only have one cost, their value in koku. If that's true, consider changing the "costs" in "you must still pay the costs of the item" to "cost."
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In the entry for Flame Fist (page 114), "Activation" should be bolded.

The description for Bind the Shadows (page 121) says a target that fails its check is Immobilized and Stunned. Stunned isn't defined anywhere. Is Bind the Shadow meant to incapacitate the target?

In the entry for Lord Bayushi's Whispers (page 140), "Effects" should be bolded.

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In the description for "Earth Needs No Eyes" (page 112), delete the "to" in "Letting the ki of the life around them to flow into their body."

In the description for "Earthen Fist," consider inserting "out" after "draws" in "the monk draws clumps of hardened earth that coat their skin, forming a rocky gauntlet."

 

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The opportunity section for Jade Strike (page 123) is labeled "Opportunities" instead of "New Opportunities."

In the activation section for Path to Inner Peace (page 130), delete the "to" in "to targeting yourself."

The opportunity sections for the rituals Divination and Threshold Barrier, both of which are on page 133, have no "New Opportunities" bar.

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