player1086397 0 Posted May 24, 2009 I am trying to put together a list of all the typos, grammar mistakes, logical errors or anything else that could be fixed in the book in case fantasy flight ever decides to do a second printing of the book and fix these mistakes. Please reply if you see any other mistakes in the book. Try to keep replies in the same format so I can add to the original post. Page:Location:Type: Description:Quote: Correction(if available): Page: downloadable Character Record Sheet Location: Top Type: Translation Description: Race was kept in spanish on the pdf but not in the book. Quote: "Raza" Correction(if available): 'Raza' should be 'Race'. Error Slayer: Brogan Page: Character Record Sheet Location: Equipment Type: Typo Description: Jewelry and Possessions Gold are misspelled. Quote: “Posesions”, "Glod" and “Jewellery” Page: 1 Location: Cover Illustration Type: Dead URL Description: The URL no longer works for Kami Quote: " homepage.mac.com/isap " Page: 1 Location: Interior Illustrations Type: Misspelling Description: URL is missspelled Quote: " wen-m.teviantart.com " Correction: http://wen-m.deviantart.com/gallery/ Page: 1, 4, 13, 61, 62, 112, 140, 159, 237, 254, 256, 290, 305 Location: Interior Illustrations Type: Inconsistency Description: When Wataru Kamiya is given credit for a piece of art it is as Kamiwata and then a year. It would be more conitenant if page 1 read as 'Wataru "Kamiwata" Kamiya' or if the citations were "Wataru Kamiya", but haveing a different name on the first page than on the citations is confusing.. Quote: "Wataru Kamiya" and "Kamiwata" Page: 1, 6, 8, 10, 15, 21, 23, 25, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42, 46, 58, 59, 84, 87, 99, 116, 156, 166, 178, 180, 181, 195, 247, 258, 278, 280, 298, 299, 300, 301, 303, 304, 308, 309, 310, 311, 312. Location: The last person in Interior Illustrations on first page and near binding everywhere else. Type: Spelling Description: It appears as "Alicia Guillen" everywhere except on the first page where is "Alícia Guillem". I don't what is correct. If it is 'm' or 'n' at the end and if it is 'i' or 'í' in the first name. Quote: "Alícia Guillem" & "Alicia Guillen" Page: 5 Location: 1st column , seventh paragraph Type: Awkward Phrase Description: The phrase "Now you are starting?" makes little sense in the context of what has been said. Quote: “Celia: That’s unusual (she says, a little surprised), cemeteries are usually behind churches, not in front. Lemures: Now you're starting? Come on, we go around the cementery." Page: 14, 25 Location: sample character generation (both pages) Type: logic Description: The character Celia gets +20 unarmed initiative bonus even though she wears armor and uses a weapon. Quote: 14: "Finally, since she goes unarmed and does not wear any armor, her player adds the unarmed Initiative bonus of 20 ... Her final Initiative score is 75." 25: "He chooses a sabre as her primary weapon ... Next, Celia's player spends 50 DP on the Wear Armor ability ... an Initiative of 75." Error Slayer: Methuselah Page: Page 65 Location: Top Second column Type: Logic Description: Large sack is cheaper than a small sack. Quote: "Large sack 1 SC; Small Sack 2SC" Error Slayer: Tonest Denon-bor Correction(if available): Quote from: exarkfr on January 25, 2009, 05:16:14 am Large sack is 1 SP ; Small sack should be 2 CC Page: 71 Location: Table 30 Type: Logic Description: Range is in meter while the rest of the book uses feet. Quote: none needed Page: 102 Location: Added State chart Type: Typo Description: 'Coma' is misspelled 'Comma'. Quote: "Comma" Error Slayer: Methuselah Page: 110 Location: Box X Type: Typo Description: "impossible:" is repeated. Quote:"Impossible: Impossible:" Page: 148 Location: Petrify Effect Type: Typo Description: Misspelled target Quote: “The tatget of this spell can resist its affects by passing a MR check of 120 Difficulty.” Page: 149 Location: Gravity Increment Effect Type: Logic Description: If the atmosphere’s mass was increased the object would be pulled toward the atmosphere (sky), therefore it would make them lighter not heaver. Quote: “The spell increases the atmosphere’s mass in a particular area, thus augmenting the pull of gravity and with it, the weight of everything contained in the zone. In gaming terms, it automatically doubles the weight of everything in a 1,500-foot radius.” Page: 155 Location: Visual Illusion Effect Type: Logic Description: 5 square feet is an area not a mass. Quote: “The image must remain static and have only a maximum mass of 5 square feet.” Page: 155 Location: Visual Illusion Added Effect Type: Logic Description: 5 square feet cannot be a radius in three dimensional space, however 5 feet can. Quote: “+5 square feet to radius and + 5 to MR of Difficulty.” Page: 155 Location: Total Illusion Added Type: Logic Description: 5 square feet is an area not a volume. Quote: “The caster can create any inanimate object with a volume not exceeding 5 square feet.” Page: 171 Location: Weakness Effect Type: Typo Description: Thi is not a word. Quote: “The target of thi spell is spell is temporarily subject to Weakness(as explained in chapter 14)” Page: 171 Location: Rejection Effect Type: Typo Description: Determine is misspelled. Quote: “the difference between that check, along with possible additional effects of the surrounding environment determin the severity of damage,” Page: 194 Location: Strengthening a Power Type: Logic Description: Shouldn’t the maximum be 5, not 10? And "can not" is one word. Quote: "Every PP spent on one their powers will give them +10 to their potential Calculation rolls. A character can not increase a Power beyond + 50 bonus. Therefore, the maximum amount of PP a character can spend on a single ability is 10." Correction: Quote from: exarkfr on December 15, 2008, 05:12:03 pm Spanish and French say : +10 per point, max 10 points, for a total of +100 (not +50) Page: 262-275 Location: (Elan) Modifiers chart(s) Type: Logic Description: The Elan level of 50 is not included in the chart. (Chart is accidently non-inclusive). Quote: Elan lower than 50 ... ... Elan higher than 50 ... ... Error Slayer: Methuselah Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
player1086397 0 Posted May 28, 2009 Adding a few more Page: 1, 6, 8, 10, 15, 21, 23, 25, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42, 46, 58, 59, 84, 87, 99, 116, 156, 166, 178, 180, 181, 195, 247, 258, 278, 280, 298, 299, 300, 301, 303, 304, 308, 309, 310, 311, 312. Location: The last person in Interior Illustrations on first page and near binding everywhere else. Type: Spelling Description: It appears as "Alicia Guillen" everywhere except on the first page where is "Alícia Guillem". I don't what is correct. If it is 'm' or 'n' at the end and if it is ' i ' or ' í ' in the first name. Quote: "Alícia Guillem" & "Alicia Guillen" Page: 1 Location: Cover Illustration Type: Dead URL Description: The URL no longer works for Kami Quote: " homepage.mac.com/isap " Page: 1 Location: Interior Illustrations Type: Misspelling Description: URL is misspelled Quote: " wen-m.teviantart.com " Correction: http://wen-m.deviantart.com/gallery/ Page: 1, 4, 13, 61, 62, 112, 140, 159, 237, 254, 256, 290, 305 Location: Interior Illustrations Type: Inconsistency Description: When Wataru Kamiya is given credit for a piece of art it is as Kamiwata and then a year. It would be more consistent if page 1 read as 'Wataru "Kamiwata" Kamiya' or if the citations were "Wataru Kamiya", but haveing a different name on the first page than on the citations is confusing.. Quote: "Wataru Kamiya" and "Kamiwata" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
minordemon2 0 Posted June 9, 2009 Ooo... Good one. I will have to read more carefully. Thanks for the editorial notes. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mantis Sine 0 Posted June 13, 2009 Lennon said: Page: 5 Location: 1st column , seventh paragraph Type: Awkward Phrase Description: The phrase "Now you are starting?" makes little sense in the context of what has been said. Quote: “Celia: That’s unusual (she says, a little surprised), cemeteries are usually behind churches, not in front. Lemures: Now you're starting? Come on, we go around the cementery." This is not so much an error, as an odd way to type something that has been spoken. But, we do speak like this. It's all about which words you stress (remember it's a conversation both in game and with the GM) Read: now YOU'RE starting?! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mantis Sine 0 Posted June 13, 2009 Lennon said: Page: 149 Location: Gravity Increment Effect Type: Logic Description: If the atmosphere’s mass was increased the object would be pulled toward the atmosphere (sky), therefore it would make them lighter not heaver. Quote: “The spell increases the atmosphere’s mass in a particular area, thus augmenting the pull of gravity and with it, the weight of everything contained in the zone. In gaming terms, it automatically doubles the weight of everything in a 1,500-foot radius.” ] Also incorrect, what you're thinking is density. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rcsob657 0 Posted June 25, 2009 how about this. Where are the darn prices for the helmets?! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mantis Sine 0 Posted June 27, 2009 You'd yhink a gmaer friendly company would be a little quicker at getting out erratta (sp?), ahem. Like the web supplement. Think it would be translated and posted on FFG support. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rcsob657 0 Posted June 29, 2009 I've read in 1 other forum, a player translated list from supposedly the spanish book. That player said they weren't in the french book either. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rcsob657 0 Posted June 29, 2009 rcsob657 said: I've read in 1 other forum, a player translated list from supposedly the spanish book. That player said they weren't in the french book either. Circlet - 50 SCForehead Protector - 80 SCLeather Hood - 40 SCCasque - 1 GCMail Coif - 5 GCOpen Helm - 20 GCGreat Helm - 40 GC http://www.edgeent.com/animaforum/index.php?PHPSESSID=4921e5d973ac85af1938fec5c0d2b750&topic=1481.0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
player33475 7 Posted June 29, 2009 rcsob657 said: Circlet - 50 SCForehead Protector - 80 SCLeather Hood - 40 SCCasque - 1 GCMail Coif - 5 GCOpen Helm - 20 GCGreat Helm - 40 GC Nice. Thanks. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
