After a further review, here are some comments:
- Step 8 of character creation is a bit undefined. I can get up to +20xp and gain a debt similar to EOTE. Maybe you should elaborate on the types of debts and their effect.
- I am not convinced by the changes on the skill list:
1 - Expedition instead of Driving, Piloting and so is strange but I will have to see it in play.
2 - I find puting Streetwise into Skulduggery not very appropiate. I think they are different enough to be separate skills.
3 - Empathy globalizing Coercion, Leadership. Negotiation and specially Cool is also strange. I would keep them separate.
4- The Power/Shaping/Nano skill need some explanation of what they can do.
- The Talent Greater powers is a good idea but as you have created it the numbers do not fit. The first iteration (Tier 1) gives you 1 spell type. If I purchase it as a Tier 2 then I get another 2 spell types (for a total of 3). Later I can buy it again as a Tier 3 talent getting anbother 2 speel types (for a total of 5). Considering that at the moment there are only 4 spell types, then purchasing this talent for the 3rd time seems not worthy. In addition the comment about purchasing it as a Tier 5 talent does not have any sense as, as a ranked talent, you can buy it as a Tier 1,2,3...
Well this is it for now. Besides of those comments I believe you are doing a great work and would love to see what you do!