LORD SHARICK said:
I BELIEVE YOU FOCUSED TO MUCH IN CLOSE COMBAT CAPABILITIES(AMBIDEXTEROUS,COMBAT MASTER,CRUSHING BLOW, TWO WEAPON WIELDER,SWIFT ATTACK, LIGHTNING ATTACK,), THAT THE TERVIGON DOESN´T HAVE, YOU ALSO GAVE IT A BETTER NATURAL WEAPON THAN THOSE IT ACTUALLY STARTS WITH ALTHOUGH YOU CAN UPGRADE IT TO THE SCYTHING TALONS YOU GAVE IT. YOU ALSO GAVE IT STINGER SPINES, WHICH IT DOESN´T HAVE ACCES TO, I BELIEVE IT SHOULD BE SLOWER, HAVE AN AGILITY OF 10 AND IT SHOULD BE ABLE TO AFFECT INDIVIDUAL TYRANID ELITES WITH ITS PSYKIC POWERS(WITH THE CORRESPONDING TWEAKING OF THE EFFECTS), THE ONSLAUGHT POWER SHOULD BE A SHOOTING ATTACK WITH A RANGE OF 30MTS, BESIDES THAT I BELIEVE YOUR JOB IS QUITE COOL!!!
Reducing its Agility is something I will do, as it has an Initiative of 1 in the tabletop game and makes sense.
Giving the Tervigon Scything Talons makes sense for the profile as it has two sets normally but due to the tabletop rules the effects of that weapon biomorph are different from just having a weapon. In the roleplaying game Scything Talons just act as a non-primitive weapon to inflict damage and do not affect the Tervigon otherwise.
The Tervigon comes stock in the tabletop with "Stinger Salvo" and the Stinger Spines are meant to reflect that. I thought "salvo" sounded a bit dumb as its a single-target attack. In actuality I'm considering raising the damage capacity a bit, as the tabletop damage is S5 (pretty high) and its Ballistic Skill is low enough that it likely won't hit that often so when it does it should scare the victim.
I think you have a good point regarding Onslaught affecting single Elite Tyranid, but I wanted to focus the Tervigon on the fact that it is the overseer of great swarms of lesser Tyranid rather than a booster for the already potent Warriors and other Elites. While it would make sense, I feel that limiting the ability to Hordes-only will give the encounter a more true-to-40k feel and will restrict gamemasters who want to use it only to make their vicious Elites more dangerous.
Anywho, I'll get the stats updated when I can to reflect things. Thanks for your input!