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Chapter VIII: Combat
Posted 22 June 2012 - 12:42 PM
Page 212, under "Repair Difficulty" Table 8-31: Repair Location & Conditions should be Table 8-30 instead.
Posted 24 June 2012 - 01:33 PM
Vehicles – Page 202
The introduction mentions the section contains Vehicle Traits. As Vehicle Traits have been moved to the Armoury, this line is no longer correct nor accurate. Perhaps a sidebar somewhere that mentions Vehicle Traits (and a page reference) would be good.
Posted 24 June 2012 - 02:36 PM
Vehicles – Page 203
Hit & Run Action, second paragraph, line 9, word 10. Should be ‘crashes’ and not ‘crash’.
Vehicles – Page 205
“Any attack that hits the top of bottom of the vehicle counts as having hit the back facing.”
That should be “…hit the Rear Facing.”.
Nice add though. I was wondering about top/bottom shots, but this covers it.
Critical Chart – Page 206
Result 1. Should be “Stunned”, not “stunned”. Defined game term.
Very Long Repair Times – Page 212
The word ‘are’ in the first line should be removed. It should just say “… the players need to complete…” not “…the players are need to complete…”.
Fire Damage – Page 213
Third line under the sub-heading Repair Time. Remove the word ‘had’. It should just say “Varies/1 hour for every 6 rounds/30 seconds (or part thereof) the vehicle spent alight or had a crewmember or passenger within it who was on fire”.
Weapon Destroyed – Page 215
Where it says “One a replacement has been acquired…” it should say “Once a replacement has been acquired…”.
Posted 25 June 2012 - 01:31 AM
"This allows the crew to fire the earthshaker cannon using a Standard Attack Action rather than an Indirect Fire or Barrage Action."
"Making an Indirect Fire or Barrage ranged Action."
Barrage Action/ Barrage ranged Action is not covered anywhere in the rulebook.
Indirect Fire is covered as a quality (and is workable), but is not mentioned as an action per se.
Posted 26 June 2012 - 07:37 PM
Pg. 188 says that when you collapse from fatigue, it's for 10TB minutes instead of 10-TB minutes.
Posted 28 June 2012 - 10:42 AM
Pg 204, Column 1, Vehicle Attacks, Bullet Point 3. States:
"Gunners or passengers can take Full Actions even if the vehicle has moved (ie. they can still make a Full-Auto Attack Action even if the vehicle moved that turn). "
Full/Semi-Auto are Half-Actions rendering that example moot.
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Posted 28 June 2012 - 02:35 PM
pg 200-Special situations box under pinning
"..may act even if his controlling Player character is under the effects of fear"
should be the effects of pinning.
Posted 29 June 2012 - 11:46 PM
On page 177 under the section Full Auto Burst it reads “…The attacker makes a Ballistic Skill Test with a –10 bonus to his attack…” the bonus should be a penalty and instead reads “…The attacker makes a Ballistic Skill Test with a –10 penalty to his attack…”
Posted 03 July 2012 - 06:49 PM
On page 211 under Repairing Vehicles, it reads "Unlike living beings vehicles to not heal naturally over time…" To should be do, so the sentence should instead read, "Unlike living beings, vehicles do not heal naturally over time…"
Posted 10 July 2012 - 07:22 AM
Page 182 in the determine hit location box, any hit between 71-85 is listed as "Right Left". This should be "Right Leg"
Posted 23 August 2012 - 01:30 PM
Table 8-18: Impact Critical Effects – Leg
Entry 6 recieves should be receives
recieving should be receiving
Table: 8-30 Repair Location & Conditions
materiels should be materiel or materials
Table: 8-31: Repair Location & Conditions should be Table: 8-30 Repair Location & Conditions
competing should be completing
…or passenger within it who had was on fire.
should be one of these
…or passenger within it who had been on fire.
…or passenger within it who was on fire.