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Chapter I: Playing the Game
Posted 22 June 2012 - 10:24 PM
On Table 1–7: Sum of SB Carrying , Lifting & Pushing. The entry for Max Carrying Weight of 45kg has a typo, reads as 45Kgg.
Posted 09 July 2012 - 11:24 AM
In the Only War Beta Corebook it says that spending Fate allows you "Instantly remove 1d5 Damage (this cannot affect Critical Damage)." This is different than the demo mission Eleventh Hour which says it should be 1d10. Not knowing which was truly produce later leads me to believe there is a discrepancy.
Posted 31 July 2012 - 12:49 AM
The Sentence: "Abseiling requires climbing gear, a drop harness or at least a good, stout line and requires…"
Should it be: "Abseiling requires climbing gear, a drop harness, or at least a good stout line and requires…"
comma in the wrong place.
Posted 31 July 2012 - 09:22 PM
"Characters my move through shadow with no penalties, but may only…"
"Characters may move through shadow with no penalties, but may only…"