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#21 valvorik

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Posted 30 December 2012 - 01:50 PM

Confusion about the cowl can early on be that descriptions of cloaked figure in black around during murders/vanishings may make a listener think the figure in black hood that is behind new criminal network.  Later finidng it was skaven, were the skaven using humans?  (instead of the truth, a human using skaven).

You can develop the criminal group more, I'm calling it the Brotherhood, and it can have some minor crime bosses who become part of it.  They all wear black hoods, it's an organization that has a "cell structure" with individual bosses that seldom meet.  Any of these bosses may seem to be the "black cowl".  There may be a "day to day" boss who thinks they are the real power merely taking "advice" from a helpful supporter who only wants a cut of the take (the real black cowl) and is your patsy.  The whole "black cowl" thing can be a red herring - the main villain with the template card can just be the "conspirator" behind the "black dowl patsy".

You can even let them think they have defeated the criminal in Part 1 and Part 2 is carrying them on to clean up the artefact.  This works just fine.

I'm also toying with the idea that the Black Cowl wears is a magical artefact that, among other things, disguises his voice.

And, last but not least, if you're really evil - there isn't just one Black Cowl.  If one falls, the Conspiracy and the Great Conspirator will raise up another.

Another option is to make whichever one you would choose only "think they are the prime mover" and really it's their lieutenant figure in each case who is the real power.

 



#22 thejondifool

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Posted 31 December 2012 - 01:16 AM

thanks for all the suggestions. There is some really good ones that should be easy to use. Unfortunatly I was not clear enough about my concerns for what my players would be up to.

I am quite sure that they would expect something rotten from at least one of the importants NPC's early one. (they are after all, veterans GM's them self for 20+ years) and what i expect them to do sooner than later is to investigate alot about the 3 major candidates and that could bring them in a situation where their work in "normal circumstances" would be able to rule out at least 1 of them as the cowl. So it's not that i fear they figure out the cowl to early, but more that they can eliminate some of the other candidates too early. To avoid that am consider adding at least a 4th candidate to the pool that has to be figured out first. Because i really think the story would benefit from having many options for the cowl for a long time.



#23 valvorik

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Posted 31 December 2012 - 04:03 AM

Would they be "waylaid" on the path to early discovery if they found suspects had ills to hide (just lesser ones) on the theory of "it's warhammer, everyone is corrupt", and let them be "users of gray methods for good purposes".  The Conspiracy's principles are in some instances "friendly" as in fewer church trials, more middle class freedom.

Luminary Mauer shelters hedge witches and such from the witch hunters but then discover it's so they can be taken into the College, not so they become sorcerers bwah ha hah (of course perhaps not all of them).

Graf von Kaufman is trying to conceal he is desperate for funds - oh he borrowed money for that expedition and if he can't drum up interest enough to sell of things from it he will have to sell his share in Red Arrow, and he owes the part of this criminal network [a victim!] (of course could be covering up he loaned it to himself and is covering monies with cimrinal income)

Captain Baerfast is intentionally drawing out the succession crisis by supporting Steward Tochfel's endless legal wrangling among contenders (genealogy charts and legal precedents back to the time of the 3 Emperors) - but because he is actually a supporter of the whole Charter concept (which explains how Rambrecht can publish pamphlets full of critiques of nobles and not get arrested) (of course really because councils are easier for Conspriracies to corrupt).






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