That looks better to me. I see that vessel as being comparable with the Gozanti (from AoR).
Ah, I forgot that the Gozanti was in AoR. I'm still reading through the book to see updates/changes; just hit the Starship chapter during my break yesterday. I'll make a few comparisons and see if there's any further changes that need to be done.
Was there anything else for this or the others that was blatantly in need of work?