Nice! That's actually very close to what I came up with, though I replaced the Carnodons (sad, I heart Carnodon) with a pair of Hecuters (recoil gloves are rare, so not an option, alas).
For reference, my list is currently looking something like this:
Pair of Hecuter Autopistols (w/ red-dot laser sight, silencer)
Best-quality mono-sword (I went with a single sword since an off-hand pistol is better than a second sword, for me)
Enforcer Carapace + helmet
And lots and lots of man-stoppers*.
Cameleoline was first on my "to-do" list, once the game starts. Thankfully we have a scum with an unreasonably high Inquiry, so it should be feasible to find
and kill the previous owner because I have no monies and acquire somehow. I really like the idea of an eviscerator though, so I might have to look into that.
Also, is the cameleoline-coating a thing from a book, or just a 'logical extension' of the cloak? Because I totally want that now.
*) Since I don't get to keep any left-over cash, I briefly entertained the idea of converting all my thrones to bullets and open a bar in Gunmetal City.